Look in the eyes
I smile each time
a new light has come
you make me want to hyme
Falling asleep
wrapped all up in you
forgetting the days
when my skys weren't so blue
telling you a secret
one I know you'll want to hear
telling you nothing at all
just wanting you to be near
I love the way you look
when you're glance over at me
telling me you love me
despite everything
cooking dinner together
or just sharing a cigarette
i'll never leave
on that you can bet
The way you look at me
when you wake up in the morning
then I tell you
ya know what, maybe you're really not SO boring
The way that I know
you'll be with me until the end
knowing i'll never be without you
this message i'll send
I gave up on love
until I found you
it sounds so corny
but really, it's so true
All I have to say is
I love you Charlie
and i'm back in those loving arms
without a worry
A contest entry
- PROVE YOU'RE WORTHY OF MY POINTS by EmeraldDaze.
480 points, ended June 5, 2007, 60 entries
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Comments
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem~ Keep up the good work~ Good luck to you in the contest!
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Line 24 kinda broke the rhythm, and there are some mispellings, but this is very sweet. I think that Charlie is very lucky. Thank you for entering my contest.
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