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The Truth About Forever

You told me once to spread my arms apart and try to fly,

I looked at you like you were crazy but I didn't ask you why,

So now I spread my arms out one to the sand and other to the sea,

Oh how I would feel much better if you were here with me.



Out in the distance I stared and started running until I lost my breath,

So I flung myself into the sand thinking I was close to death,

all these thoughts running through my head even though I was sitting still,

that fact that when I am not with you everything just falls downhill.



I thought I told myself that without you im alright,

but thats different then what im feeling now, lying without you here tonight,

So I guess Im one of those people who are blinded by what they cant see,

what really kept me up all night was the thought of you without me.

So.. how was it?

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    May 12, 2007
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    Welcome to allpoetry

    Interesting. I would have liked to see you explore that spread your arms and fly part. I felt that could have been expanded on. Very abstract. I like the ending too. Its not about missing the other person its about is the other person missing you.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy