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I always just wanted to lay with you
And watch the sky brighten from black to blue
Just staying by your side
Telling everything I need to confide

And I know once I open
And come out of my shell
You would understand all I had spoken
and you would listen to all I had to tell

But I don't think you would know
That all I would be able to show
Would be just a happy smile
As sweet as acid and bile

For as you say I can not fool you
You do not know that is untrue
For while I have not lied
I can not yet confide

If I were to brake into tears
And unleash all my tormenting fears
If you even saw a fraction
I still fear your reaction

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  • patsoldcat
    May 13, 2007
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    powerful

    a moving write, passionate,erotic,loving,fearful,longing.

    the intamacy here is very vivid as the fear of lose were you to come out of that shell.

    yet with arms enfolding you, and lips to kiss the tears.
    this heart would listen and hear all you would say.

    good write.

    al