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life, perforated

nap time,
blood type,
automatic hunger strike,

these weather veins
[in these wrists]
sing swichblade
[you don't exist]

death date,
so belated,
left with life
[perforated]

explicit darkness
[down the drain]
fluresent bullets
[to the brain]

with sympathy
well thought
[caught]
in the glow of your flashlight
[night life]
your veins
[my knife]


still...


...

bang open the door
[your lips, my hips]
both swollen and sore.
looking back at these sheets
tangled messes of me
i begg you not to leave
i'm ignored.

Author notes

i wrote this like, last year, and just never posted it.

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  • Hebz
    June 20

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    Why not posted it, it's very very beautiful, though sad

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Hebz