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[hated and gone]

Sadly, no one will admit,
that there are maggots feeding on it
no one says that he is dead,
they say he's sleeping instead
Everyone tries to forget,
and tries to act upset
Even though we all dispised,
we won't let the feeling show in our eyes

It happened so long ago,
but we're all still holding onto the hatred,
keeping it bottled up inside
It's sad that no one even cried,
He's still hated, and no one will let it show

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Hannah Duffin

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  • Nathan Explosion
    March 6, 2008

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    well, i love this piece of work, truly a perfect song/poem. wish i could put how much i liked this into words.

    Demon