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Summertime (Double Etheree)

Sun
Shines bright
In the sky
Radiating
Heat and light for all
Warm summer days that seem
To last an eternity
Basking in the glow of the sun
Splashing in the pool, cookouts and games
Nature's benefits for all to enjoy

Campouts, fishing, reuinions, and parties
Under the light of the flaming ball
Sit in the shade a tree provides
Taking a break from the heat
Relaxation sets in
Enjoy the weather
Summertime brings
Take a break
From school
Fun

Author notes

'The best you can be all the while;
Never be afraid to smile'.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    I thought this poem looked familiar.
    So nice to see it again. Thanks for entering.
    Good luck.
    Brian


  • Ale E
    September 9, 2007
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    I like this. Especially for someeone so young. I'm only 14 and it's good to see other young people take such an interest in writing as I do. Very cute. It made me smile- the background really brought it together! Thank you for entering. I wish you the very best of luck in my contest.

    aleXox- never stop writing.


  • Namita
    September 7, 2007

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    Wonderful double wtheree! Wow! And for 13 and under, this si impressive. Thanx so much for entering, young poet.

    Luv,
    Candy


  • JOSHv3
    August 30, 2007

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    Wow i wish it was summer here its like cold and rainy i hate it thanks for the reminder lol thanks for the entry!! And good luck in the contest!


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 19, 2007

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    This is full of summer You did a great job here. It made me want to go outside and enjoy myself


  • blackday
    July 23, 2007
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    I'm sorry buddy, but your poem has been eliminated from the contest.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 16, 2007
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    I thought this poem looked familiar. Thanks for entering, Zack. Good luck.
    Brian

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 25, 2007
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    Great. I love summer. The green leaves, the flowers, the grass, the warm weather. It all keeps my spirit going. Thanks for sharing this. Nicely done
    Brian


  • Marcus.
    May 11, 2007

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    keewl

    awesome that really makes me want to get out of school! tell me what a etheree is though, i have no clue...hehe...


  • Miss Sweet Kisses
    May 10, 2007

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    Peaceful!

    I loved it! You write soo well and your soo young! Good job sweetie! Keep up the good work! Muaaaahz
    X0X0X0

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