Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

“The Smile”

Queue formed; cocks were crowing; far out rimed country.
Gathering. for the day of festival.
Strange, a boy out of bed so early.
What’s you name, lad?
An appreciator of arts. Tom.
They say she smiles; four centuries old.
Four brass poles…Velvet rope. Don’t allow rocks.
We’re all here to spit? Has to do with hate,
The past…hardly nobody or nothing we don’t hate.
Tore books; burned them. Drunk and laughing.
Last motorcar; Glass, glittering heaps.
Few spots of beauty. A soul for pretty things. Peace.
Tom stood before the painting. Beautiful…
Yes, the Mona Lisa.
Participate in the destruction of-----shouting, pummeling about, stampeding.
Piece of canvas. Hand clenched tightly to his chest, hidden.
The smile, the lovely smile, there in the darkness. Warm and Gentle.
The world was silent; the moon sailed up, then down the…
Cold sky toward morning.


Author notes

This poem was an English assignment and is based on the story "The Smile" in a book called S is For Space. Every word in the poem comes from the story.

♥Comment Please♥

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • darkspiritonline
    May 26, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Well I think your poem is good... and an interesting way to write about a book assignment... ^_^


  • May 12, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    !!!!!!

    LOL! I wrote one just like that...today is my birthday! haha, sorry random!


  • abigail- - -
    May 11, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    No one is commenting *cries* [not really] but i would LOVE it if someone could...i'm DYING HERE. [not really again.]