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I love my mother (I wrote this for mother's day)

I’m trying to think of something to say
On this beautiful Mother’s Day
Some big immaculate wonderful phrase
Something amazing to say

But I can’t think of anything like that
Something complicated and true
I cannot think of anything else
Than the simple phrase “I love you”

Please tell me what you think

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  • Simply Olivia
    May 10, 2007
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    Beautiful

    like a greeting card


    • just-a-lonely-girl
      May 10, 2007
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      do you really think so? I was just writing something for my mom, and thought I'd put it on here. Thanks!