I have fears. I feel doubt and pain.
I don't want to be alone standing in the rain.
Someone to be my guide, keep me true.
I need someone's love, someone like you.
To be miles away, but know you're by my side,
The person in whom I can always confide.
Tell me I can, that I can try and win,
That on my finger the world does spin.
Keep me close, whisper me to sleep sound.
Safe completely in your arms wrapped around.
Keep my fears from overtaking,
Nurture our love in the making.
Please tell me what you think
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HOOOOD Wink ^~
this is simply beautiful~ I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!!!!!
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Hoodwinked
I like your words. I need someone to love too and someone who will be there for me. I need a guide. Know of anuone that wants the job? -
Hood-Winked!
Awwww what a sweet and lovely poem for the one you love. I could feel all the love you have for this person. Wonderful imagery and emotion. Another wonderful write
You have just been Hood-Winked courtesy of the Poetic Bandits
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Hoodwinked!!!
You my dear have a romantic side that is starting to show in your poetry and I for one am liking what I see, this versatility is really awesome. You seem to be able to go from deep dark writes to love and romance without a problem at all... that takes talent, and you my dear have talent! And I my friend am a Poetic Bandit here to take part in an ambush to hooodwink you because we think you need to know just how special you are!
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i feel the same way as in this poem great job i loved it has a nice flow to it too
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Freakin sweet nick, its hot, u 2
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awww ...
Yes yes .. I am miles away yet here
lol .. don't worry
I know that this aint written about me
but you know nick, one day
You'll have someone by your side
Who will stand up by you and never let you go
It won't come easily
And It won't come rapidly
But it'll come
Hold on to that hope
" It's all in the waiting "
NeveR ♥
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everyone needs someone to trust and love. I hope you found another person to share with. I loved this is was short and said what it needed to say without dragging on.
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I love this. Short but so sweet. Very heartfelt. I enjoyed reading this alot. It's something many can relate to the wanting of a love that won't end. Very fine job.
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