my vision is fading
red to black
black to red
petals of a rose drifting by
[don't ask me
i know nothing
don't ask me
i am nothing]
blink my eyes
push away the light
[no,
push away the dark]
grab the razor standing by
and put it to my wrist
[monday
i loved you
tuesday
i broke you
wednesday
i killed you
and today
i'm sorry]
press deep
but the metal is cold
[ice dripping
drip. drip. drip.
landing on your shirt]
quickly
pull the razor
{but i didn't have a razor
so i figured
i use the scissors instead}
the blood drips
[drip. drip. drip
landing on your shirt
leaving a tiny stain]
{i felt my stomach
and i knew exactly where to cut
i wanted to cut all the fat off my body}
blood
on the floor
blood
on the walls
blood
everywhere
[except in my veins]
[i'm NOT emo
don't call me that
i'm not crazy
don't tell me i am]
[monday
i loved you
tuesday
i broke you
wednesday
i killed you
and today
i'm sorry]
Author notes
["i don't know"]
[dirty and broken]
i don't think this makes sense...oh, well....
**the words in the {} are direct quotes from a book, Stick Figure by Lori Gottlieb**
A contest entry
- Emo word bank by xlilliexdiesx.
425 points, ended May 24, 2007, 15 entries
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it makes sense to me and it seems so.................vivid
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{i didn't want to ruin the whole white house!}...love that piece and i like this poem...very good...dark...beautiful
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your comment makes me laugh
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hehe
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blu?
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wtf dude
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Very good
[monday
i loved you
tuesday
i broke you
wednesday
i killed you
and today
i'm sorry]
i really liked this part..
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pretty good but some of it was confusing god luck
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