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My Forever Dream

far from each other yet we still fall in love
our hearts never met but yet we feel like we have
we can only dream if seeing eachother at this point

our dreams come true when we talk on the phone
talking about anything
everything
we speek as though we always knew

the stars around us show we are to be
they let us speek more and more every time
show us what life has for us
only they can tell

we can only sit and wait on our destonys to cross
only pray that the stars are true
but i know forever we will be togeter
forever we sill stand

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  • night-eyed demon
    July 12, 2007
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    nice poem. I hope you do good in the contest.


  • individuality gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    ah yeah i know that one with the smiles when you are on the phone, how nice it feels to hear your love laughing, a hood poem

  • Hikago
    May 22, 2007
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    awsome

    I love the poem I agree with what it says since thats how I feel at times ya know


  • football-knight
    May 15, 2007
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    awww... wow this is so sweet... bery amazing write... I loved it..


  • Love-Lee
    May 10, 2007
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    Awww

    Tis is so sweet honey! I have been having a tiny bit of I dunno something I need to talk to someone who knows something about it... and you do so like if you can or want to message or call mom's house. I may feel better by the time you get ahold of me but for now I do not

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