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Evaluated

Faces forwards, looking on.
Moving quickly,
to have come and gone.
Crawl, walk, jump, jog.
So into life,
it's as if they're in a fog.
They're souls that need to decide
which train to death
they wish to ride.
Sustaining life thanks to the sun,
but when it goes down
life is often taken by a gun.
Some fear death after life ends,
others disagree and claim
that's when real life begins.

Earth

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  • May 10, 2007
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    very good

    your a real believer in god need more