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Life(according to him)

He has the ring...
the girl...
the truck...
the plan
(the stable one).

He has not the courage...
the strength...
the respect...
the faith
(to do it on his own).

He has the girl(on the side)...
the friend...
the fling...
the quiet one.

Too bad.

He has not the sense...
the decency(monogamy)...

To give it all...

just for one.

Author notes

This poem is based on a close friend of mine, who I recently found out more about his character than I ever wished to or believed he could be. It's just as I wrote it. So enjoy and comment!

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  • Lively Matter
    November 30, 2007

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    Awesome write ^_^ Quite a bit of meaning to it hehehe, Wonder how long ago it was sence you wrote this one lol havent commented on very many poems... Fantastically written! ^_^

    • Luin Henien-Lannor
      December 6, 2007
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      Uh I wrote this one a little while ago..maybe around March or April because it's when all the drama occurred. >.< Thank you for commenting. =)