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Stupid Heartbreaker

Such a stupid Heartbreaker, taking my bestfriend away,
To turn her into a single teen mother.
But she doesn't care, they're "In love."
If that is love then I'd rather slowly be smothered.
He thinks hes all that,
but hes not much at all.
Just a pretty face, Alot of cheap friends,
And HERPES if I recall.
Here's the best part,
Hes cheated on her thrice!
He doesn't care when she cries,
hes colder than ice.
All he wants is her body,
And when he gets bored,
He'll throw her to the curb.
Thats way more than she can afford.
Its not my problem,
I can't stop her.
She'll do what she wants,
I can't find a cure.



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I hate you Clay

*Rawr*

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 14, 2007
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    Well... guys can be totally cruel ... that why i am swearing them off!! I just want a guy who likes me for my personality!! Is that too much to ask??? Well I love this poem and I hope your friend realizes what a jerk this guy is and great write keep up the good work !!! and feel free to check out my page anytime!! Jess


  • Darkened eyes
    May 13, 2007

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    This has such a powerful message and tells such a strong story. It's sad that you've lost a friend and they seem to be beyond the point of listening to you, but things can change. It's a great and powerful write =-)
    x


  • RazorbladeKissCasel
    May 10, 2007
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    Yeah chicken nugget

    I like loverz it!!!!*muah* kisses