Sometimes I feel as if death is my only escape
But even then will I be free?
Thinking of how I died
And left him behind
With him still on earth
Partying
Drinking
Happy as ever
Just knowing I am gone
My heart is with him
It will never be mine again
It truly is funny
How someone can break your heart
and you still love them
With all the little pieces
Why can't I get over him
Move on
We tried so many time
So many ways
And for so many reasons
It never works
And now with a little addition on the way
He once again wants to find a reason to rid himself of me
And so he does
Then I swear up and down
I won't call
But it never works
All the pain
All the anger
Builds up inside of me
I feel that I could explode
Once again all I want
Is to run, jump in his arms, and cry
Hear his voice
Know he wants me, like I want him
Sometimes I feel as if death is my only escape
A contest entry
- depression or dark love by Darkened eyes.
370 points, ended May 24, 2007, 26 entries
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Comments
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This is really well written and has a great flow when you read it, yet also a great sadness and insight to what you've gone through. Many people would be able to relate to not being able to let someone go.
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i really hope that u wrote this only for the contes t
and not live it for real, coz its really painful
ive been there and i know how does it feel.
the word r so emotionnaly intense, u almost made me cry
good job, really
peace.
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Sweetie!
I am fine... I wrote this a while back and when I found it I just found a contest to put it in, I have been down that road, but I truly plan to never go back... I lve my life my man me and our unborn chid now!
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