Puzzled conundrum in shattered pieces,
fall through lines of emptiness.
Forage among events of yore,
for the seams that may be pasted,
put together in a semblance of meaning.
Yet the bond does not adhere
and leaks of sanity spread from disaster.
Leaving a patchwork quilt of scotch tape
to hold the soul in hope for a brighter
tomorrow.
A contest entry
- Picture and Title Inspired Writes, 15 lines or less. by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended May 12, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really liked this!
love your use of scotch tape.
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This was really really good.. The image that you created with your words was very strong.. great write..
Peace to you, Jetleena
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Wow
Wonderful imagery here...You have each line packed with emotion and impact...
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OMG1 I can not believe I missed this one in finals. This should have been a trophy winner. I am so sorry. I missed up! This was one of my top and I do not know how I did not get it to finalize.
Please enter it in the invite contest.
Thank you!
Love
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Love this! Very thought provoking and creative. i have known this feeling well, though I must say i am often held together by glue, duct tape, packing tape...whatever can be found at the moment.
Great job!
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This is really one to make the reader think very dep works really well so much said in just a few lines well done and good luck with this strong piece
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Very thought provoking write you have penned...Well deserving of the picture.Powerful words reveal such sadness and devastation.Ones life torn apart to be pieced back together in hopes for a brighter day.Great message and powerful thoughts.
Good Luck in the contest
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Different
Well, I think that makes everyone stand back and think.
This is such a powerful piece from a very powerful picture.
I like the title and the way it ties in with everything. It is very catchy and was the reason I decided to take a look.
The imagery throughout is beautiful.
Congratulations again on your wonderful writing skills.
Take care.
Lillybet
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