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Sunday

His eyes watch my every move
like an invisible stalker
except that He will never get in trouble...

My blood is pouring now
though I feel no pain
I feel so alone
and yet He is watching?

I feel as cold as ice
though the blade is on fire
My loneliness just grows deeper
like the knife burning in my flesh

My soul is black
My eyes are red
I am alone
for eternity and beyond.

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brokenpeace "i don't know" u didn't say we had to list the words, so i didn't.

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  • xlilliexdiesx
    May 10, 2007

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    Thank you for following the rules. I liked this one you did a good job. I wish you luck. I you would read and commment my poems that would be great