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Emo View

As I draw another razor across my wrist,
The blood releases my pain.
The crimson flow runs down my arms,
And I fear no more.
I  am so angry at the fact its me.
Why do I have to be the one?
Hiding in my bathroom,
Crying with tears of never ending pain
They call it Emo,
But I cant help it.
I love what it shows me.
I can hear the music, but I can see the blood.
The adrenline of it,
I did it.
I was my creation.
My doing.
I have no room for others to hurt me,
I do it myself.
I draw this razor

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Ashley DiGiovanni...i dont know

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  • I Luciferi
    May 11, 2007
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    You know how I feel about the emo shit, but I used to be a cutter myself, so I know the feelings that you go through before and after the incident. Cutting does not make you emo, it is an addiction and a disorder. I wish you the best of luck with this.

    -David


  • Belial Bloodrayne
    May 11, 2007

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    I know how you feel Ashley.. I'm not gonna tell you to stop... It's like an addiction, and it does feel awfully good... I found myself some help for it though... I'm all takin care of... You ever need anything, let me know ok?


  • xlilliexdiesx
    May 10, 2007
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    I really like this but you need to go back and read the rules and change acordingly thanks


    • xlilliexdiesx
      May 14, 2007
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      Thank you for going back and reading the rules. and changing what needed to be changed.


  • Dirty and Broken
    May 10, 2007
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    no cutting no no no no no no no....please?


  • XxXAtreyuKingXxX
    May 10, 2007
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    honey! BAD! *smacks you* no! ONCE YOU START IT IS FUCKING HARD TO STOP! BAD! NO!

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