I grab the knife on wensday
the crimson just drips drip by drip
I pray things will be better on thrusday
I pray that things will go away,
they dont,its saturday now
the razors in my skin, just enough for me to give in
the thoughts are running throught my head
as I sit here alone, waiting by the phone
feeling the tears stream down my face
hearts rushing, the loves all gone
Im dead and its all his fault
my life was a waste
Author notes
LOSt n Confused "I DONT KNOW"
A contest entry
- Emo word bank by xlilliexdiesx.
425 points, ended May 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow. There is a hella lot of emotion in this, and i'm sorry if you really did this... =/
I cut for 4 years :S
Beautiful write =]
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randi
ha ha thanks so much I didnt really like it.. Im kinda scared to think about death but thanks -
wow that is soooo full of emotion. your word are so powerful. you get your point across right away. great job!!
loves you
{(*randi*)}
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This was good please go back and read the rules and change acordingly and then reply to this comment so I know that you followed the rules thanks
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Thank you for going back and changing the rules!
<3 Lillie
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