Passion changed from lust,
strained the elegant velvet bloom.
Colour reflecting spirit,
displaying now, his darkened love.
Author notes
well... the concept would be like. when passion is like a wild fire, the rose reflects that and is red.
when love is churned dark, it again reflects that and turns black. get it?
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Nicely done! To many times in life love turns dark and normally due to it being lust and not real love.
Strong write of truth in it's brevity.
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I understand
I've been in a few relationships like that! LOL I hope you don't have to experence it, but I think most do experence heartbreak at some time in their lives. Nice poem, The Shaker
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got it
don't forget, love without lust is like a beautiful candle without a flame
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