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To young to die

He was only two
Everyone loved him
And everyone knew
He would soon be gone

But nothing prepared us
For that sad day
It felt as if our hearts
Were all ripped away

Away to heaven
We sent this sweet boy
We cried as his mom
Lay with him his favorite toy

He was much to small for his age
His bones never grew
But his heart and other organs
Knew what to do

He stretched out that morning
Close to his mother's heart
Never again to breath
It tore her apart

The doctor said his heart
Was too large for it's frame
They buried him in a few days
His whole family came

Everyone remembers
None can forget
He was still tiny enough
To fit in a bassinet

He saved our family
Brought us together
We miss him so
And so we will forever

Author notes

I send out a prayer for those left behind

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  • RuthKephart
    June 18, 2007
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    Such a heartfelt write. Congratulations on the gold
    Ruth


  • ibsons hysops
    May 29, 2007

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    me too. Great thoughts with this one.
    Good luck in the Contest!


  • FisherCat
    May 10, 2007

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    This was just sooooo sad. Not really sure what to say. This one really pulls at the heart strings. You did a great job on this one. Thanks for sharing, and best of luck in the contest.


  • StarEyes
    May 10, 2007
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    This is beautiful and soooooo heartfelt!! I know these feelings only too well!! My 9 month old niece died, during my High School Graduation. And I have recently lost one very, very near and dear to me. and it is sooooooo painful and hurts like nothing else in this world!

    Best of luck in the contest!