Scene stimulates senses
Sweeping spectacles seen
Sun shows spheres sparkling stage
Scented sensations sniffed
Splendid sea sighs softly
Sunlight shimmers sweetly
Souls stir, superb splendour.
A contest entry
- Pleiades Picture Competition V by ShelleyA.
525 points, ended May 19, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. Alliterative genius! I especially like these 2 lines:
"Splendid sea sighs softly
Sunlight shimmers sweetly"
Congrats on your bronze!
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Has your signature all over this one - wonderful in every way! Congrats on the bronze ... x
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Nice title. Perfect form. Very good flow and tone. Good imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Good descriptives. Excellent word choice. Strong alliteration. Good assonance. Your poem fits the picture for which it was written. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Oh, how beautiful and such stunning immagery and you somehow managed to begin each word with the same letter, what a stunning job you've done and the poem is so exquisite and simply Bravo. Good Luck to you in the contest and all the best!
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Sensational
I started off trying to keep mine all the same letter but gave up... You managed to do it with style. Great job.
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Sis this is a most beautiful pleiades, so serene and draws you in, good luck in the contest love you Josie
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This is very pretty Pleiades. Beautiful use of alliteration.
Harrisham Minhas
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lovely you really do make picture comes alive and your words always amaze me
good luck in the comp
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