Its time to change my Hat!
Yes my life is a whirlwind , i have many moods and changes i am going through . When you look at me i can change at anytime, because i am a woman of many hats as i like to say!
As a woman , even a Christian woman , a mother , a wife , a sensual woman, all this belongs to me .They are my feelings and i am entited to them ! Dont ya think?
So when you see my many changes ,as i will see yours dont judge me , no one really knows my heart but me !
Life is funny that way .
My wise Grandmother once said ...to me ....
I am 70 years old but there is still a 16 year old trapped in me "
Now that i am 40 i know how she felt !
Changes are lifes way of letting you breath a breath of fresh air from the clutter of smoged air around you .
Its time to change my hat again.
Author notes
My first poem ever written here the original date was May 11, 2007
A contest entry
- In Thought by Dusty.
539 points, ended May 11, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - First Poem I Ever Wrote on AP by PerVirtuous.
900 points, ended August 23, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
Now my precious,
this is so well said, i asked my mom that too
she said she felt like she was 20~
no one should have the guts, to judge another
I always felt that they would be judge by the same
manner even harder,
you give me alot to think about
loved this and you
Rend
-
Very interesting insights. Thank you.
-
The many hats of a womans life this you did portray so well and by golly yes you are entitled to every blessed feeling trapped inside.
Now of course I will have to read more of your work as time permits.
-
Hahahahaha, loved this
At least you are aware of hat changing, for many never
give it a thought. I suppose when i think of my life. I also change hats. I have always felt young inside, and desire for love, a gentleness, filled with tender passion, has been my goal.
Each one can and should change without any complaints from others, for its your life. Thanks so much for sharing your feelings and HATS, with us. I enjoyed it very much.
Bro.
-
NIce
This is a great projection of who you want to world to see - not who you are - you kind of came close -" As a woman , even a Christian woman , a mother , a wife , a sensual woman, all this belongs to me " These are nice adjetives - about faucets - we are all diamonds - and have many ' moods' but who is the person behind them? -
You have made some dramactic differences in your style of writing. Nice job! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
-
I think this was my first write!
~Lisa~ -
What a beautiful write
So touching and heartfelt poem. It really touched my heart so much. I can feel the deep feeling in your heart revealed. Well applauded. (Lisa)
"am 70 years old but there is still a 16 year old trapped in me "
Now that i am 40 i know how she felt !
Changes are lifes way of letting you breath a breath of fresh air from the clutter of smoged air around you .
Its time to change my hat again."
-
I loved this poem and I definately wouldnt be suprised if a more educated woman wrote this.
It seeps woman intuition and knowledge.
I loved the last line
It really shows the way we feel about our appearance as we grow older and its true it does slowly becoem a thing of not new sexy clothes or hair styles. More about the simple differences.
I believe we age on the inside better then out.
Time does the body damage but the mind will stay at the age of wanting guiltless fun.
I hope you do well in this contest.
El
x x x
-
What i was thinking
Well at the time i wrote this i was trying to be so many things to so many people and people were judging my every move , they still do . Being a Christian people sometime have veiws about how you should be ..heehee well i like being who i am and i am very different in alot of ways so my Hats are me and i have many of them . (smile)
I may have got off track with the 40 thing but thats a landmark HAT!!!! lol
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
