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Godly Leeches

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Fucking Jesus,
Fucking God,
Another middle eastern religion
Thats fucking odd,

Fucking wont grovel
To some supposed king
because you pretend he knows
Fucking everything,

What a load of fucking tosh
Supernatural head fuck cosh
Thats its Jesus man, fucking ignore
Just whats real, you stupid whore.

Your church is of godly leeches
That's full of fucking gold
You say, lets care for the poorest
That stories getting old.

Against all wars
Is that fucking right ?
Wars, wars for your book
Fight that good fucking fight.

Listen now you god type thug

Your beliefs have come unstuck
Preach on, with your tales of fear
Realize soon we don't give a fuck.

 

BOLLOX !

 

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    May 12, 2007

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    YEAHHHHH

    The best piece on the subject I have ever had the privilage of reading.

    I kneel and kiss your feet! BRAVO!!!!

    Hugs, Vampy


  • polly filla
    May 12, 2007
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    of course you won, with that ending, I'm not surprised! well done again!


  • polly filla
    May 10, 2007
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    that ending gobs! Punk as Fuck

    now we're talking!


  • Nogod
    May 10, 2007

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    See? It's the simple things in life I like. No need for cryptic metaphors and misunderstood euphamisms (or whateverthefucktheyrecalled), just keep it simple and to the point. That's why I like this.


  • FabApocalypse
    May 10, 2007
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    Sorry! Forgot these...

  • FabApocalypse
    May 10, 2007

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    Holy....er. Sweet J....um. Much vitriol and lots and lots of barbed energy. And just a touch of the "halibut" factor (watch out for lightning bolts). This is quite songwriterly, too: I can hear a punky guitar riff under it!

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