Little faerie
Can't you see
Your beautiful wings
Trapped just under surface?
Let them stretch
And as they grow
Those surrounding
Will gaze fondly
I feel your pain
I've been there, too
A mermaid
A faerie
A ballet dancer
A musician
These dreams
Mine surround and protect
Fragile wings,
Emergent faerie,
As we both grow
Into the beautiful women
We are destined
To Become
A contest entry
- 0 by Lauren Noir.
850 points, ended June 2, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A mermaid
A faerie
A ballet dancer
A musician
Beautiful lines, everything that goes through peoples head is in this, in a delicate, beautiful way
You got every dream of mine and brilliantly and really worked the pome brillinatly
I loved it
Well done, this is so special
Thnak you for entering
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