will we ever learn?
merely a flower blooming
life’s secret,
rests in living
how ironic life
far too busy to partake
we miss what,
it is we seek
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you
I very much appreciate your kind comments on my write, I love haiku and find myself better at less than more. Your kind applause and comments appreciated!
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A very wise poem and very deep statement. I can relate to the last stanza in a big way. I think a lot of peole can. Very wonderful little poem.
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hmmm what will I say...we are both new to this type of poem. Give me time to research in all the libraries here about this form of poetry.lol.
seriously and not a flattery for I hate giving flatteries, you have the talent for short short poetry. you can expressed it well and captured the moments. This is another one of your best short short poem.
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Thank you!
It is hard to write a form when only given the short example on Shadow Poetry, but I agree, I should also dig into this form more, since I am a novice. I think I have the general drift, but I cannot be certain. Thanks you for your kind comments, very appreciated!
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As Allmanda so wisely put of Oscar Wilde, simple is complex and complex is complete for a man who understands the beauty that lies within. Love, C
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Thank you kind lady!
Thank you for taking the time to comment, always appreciate your comments and applause. It is hard keeping up with you since your trip, hell it has been hard just keeping up with you (reading your work) I swear I have never seen anyone so consistently put them out! I envy your ability! Thank you as always very much appreciated!
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"I adore simple pleasures. They are the last refuge of the complex"
Oscar Wilde
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Thank you
Very much appreciate your Oscar Wilde quote and applause, alway an honor to be compared to another poet. Thank you!!
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