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Break my heart (hope you die)

Break my heart
Hope you die
Shove a needle
In each eye

Suffocation
No breathing
Some space
Would be relieving

Leave me be
Leave me alone
I don't want to talk
On the god damn phone

Don't you get it
Stupid boy
You must think
I'm being coy

I'm not
Not kidding
My heart
Isn't for your bidding

Go die somewhere
And I'm not funny
Go die somewhere
Then it'd be funny

Can't believe that thought occured
In my pretty little head
By I really do wish
You would wind up dead

In a ditch
With an STD
From that *bunny*
Definitely not from me

Break my heart
Hope you die
Castrate you
And make you cry
Just like you

Made

Me

Author notes

No I'm not a psychopathic killer. Just a victim of cheating, and a rather angry one.

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Comments


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008
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    L.o.v.e.d this alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck ..<3.. Shelly


  • MrsJones
    May 9, 2008

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    Interesting write, definitly a strong angry rant. There are a few errors in wording and spelling in this that you need to fix, other than that it was a good poem. Thanks for entering.