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Faithful to the End

[Guitar Solo]

[Add drums]

VERSE 1

How do I put in simple words

What I really feel for you

To keep it all bottled up inside

Just would never do



Afraid to tell my inner feelings

What will all those people say

You make me free to me myself

Everytime you come my way

[CHORUS]

You always make me smile

When I want to frown

You'll hold me in your arms

When the rain falls down

Everytime I'm with you

Thankful we're both friends

Wishing to be more to you

But faithful to the end



[VERSE 2]

When tears fall down my forlorn face

Thinking that I soon would die

You wiped away my weeping eyes

And told me not to cry



[Repeat Chorus]

You always make me smile

When I want to frown

You'll hold me in your arms

When the rain falls down

Everytime I'm with you

Thankful we're both friends

Wishing to be more to you

But faithful to the end



[VERSE 3]

You had me from the first hello

From the very start

Your gorgeous smile caught my eyes

and stole away my loyal heart



[REPEAT CHORUS]

You always make me smile

When I want to frown

You'll hold me in your arms

When the rain falls down

Everytime I'm with you

Thankful we're both friends

Wishing to be more to you

But faithful to the end



[GUITAR SOLO]



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  • Shakari
    June 14, 2007
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    I loved this piece in all of its musicality. Your chorus was beautiful and you poured your hear and soul into this piece. I can see that your heart was aflame with love throughout this piece, and I only hope that more people can feel this way in their relationship. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing!