[Guitar Solo]
[Add drums]
VERSE 1
How do I put in simple words
What I really feel for you
To keep it all bottled up inside
Just would never do
Afraid to tell my inner feelings
What will all those people say
You make me free to me myself
Everytime you come my way
[CHORUS]
You always make me smile
When I want to frown
You'll hold me in your arms
When the rain falls down
Everytime I'm with you
Thankful we're both friends
Wishing to be more to you
But faithful to the end
[VERSE 2]
When tears fall down my forlorn face
Thinking that I soon would die
You wiped away my weeping eyes
And told me not to cry
[Repeat Chorus]
You always make me smile
When I want to frown
You'll hold me in your arms
When the rain falls down
Everytime I'm with you
Thankful we're both friends
Wishing to be more to you
But faithful to the end
[VERSE 3]
You had me from the first hello
From the very start
Your gorgeous smile caught my eyes
and stole away my loyal heart
[REPEAT CHORUS]
You always make me smile
When I want to frown
You'll hold me in your arms
When the rain falls down
Everytime I'm with you
Thankful we're both friends
Wishing to be more to you
But faithful to the end
[GUITAR SOLO]
Faithful to the end.....
A contest entry
- Lyrical Love by Meyeryakov.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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I loved this piece in all of its musicality. Your chorus was beautiful and you poured your hear and soul into this piece. I can see that your heart was aflame with love throughout this piece, and I only hope that more people can feel this way in their relationship. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing!

