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Amante De Moi

Amant De Moi

Before,
Love was just another word.
It never really meant a thing,
Until you entered my life.

You
        Broke
                  Down

The barriers I had put up,
So many years before this;
And put yourself
In their place.

Every single Day
My love for you grows stronger,
And
Every single Day
I thank God for
Every single Moment
That I have you.

After,
Your broke down my barriers
I found myself longing
To define,
Love.

It was so foreign…
So amazing…
So Untamed…
I wanted it to last
Forever, and a Day

And one day,
I found that
Love… It is…
Je ne sais de quoi.
    Undefinable,
Difficult to put into words…
Then again…
Love.
Doesn't need to be put
Into words because,
Love
        Is
          You.
Je'Taime 

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  • FlipperSwitch
    May 29, 2007

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    This is incredibly beautiful and made even better because I felt as though you were writing from my heart. Thank you for your entry.


  • willowprincess
    May 14, 2007

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    love is you. what a great line. i liked this a lot and will probably return to read it agian. good job and good luck.


  • shutter-bug
    May 10, 2007

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    wow, i love the foreign flavor! you picked the right contest to enter this in, because i just happen to be in my second year of french! i guess thats why i liked it so much. it also was very simple, and very sweet. thank you for entering!