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~*Pig..."ee"*~

mmm Doll, the way you .look. at me
liquor-soaked breath && split knuckles
Babe,
Fuck me
(((before the pain fades away)))
                         
                                      *hard* on the bedroom floor
                                your hands wrapped *tight* around my throat

Pig
♥ I love the way you hate me ♥

&& as your on your back ------>>>> my rugburn && your -sore- thighs
  cigarette in hand
*smack* my ass && call me your
.dirty.
.little.
.whore.
((--babe, I'm yours--))
Piggy,
    I love your sin against my jaw
  *collision*
&& I'll just *roll my eyes* [thinkupanexcuse]
            && laugh about it later
Pig,
I love the way you hate me.

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  • over the rainbow--x
    May 19, 2007

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    'Babe,
    Fuck me
    (((before the pain fades away)))

    *hard* on the bedroom floor
    your hands wrapped *tight* around my throat

    Pig
    ♥ I love the way you hate me ♥'
    I love this^^ I haven't spoken to you in ages, you okies? I love this poem, reminds me of an ex boyfriend... =| anyways great poem =]=] ♥


  • whiterabbit.
    May 10, 2007

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    ooh I like this. Its dirty, twisted, dark, erotic, painful and has love and hate. I love the title and the structure. Wonderful descriptions. Great job hun.