Alone and blue I be
And angry too of course
My best friend stole my gal from me
Alone and blue I be
Hearing them flee away with glee
Together on my favorite horse
Alone and blue I be
And angry too of course.
In a list
A contest entry
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this could be a very short song i like the meaning
best of luck
--kat -
That's cute gave me a good chuckle. Good luck in the contest and happy trails
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I like the emotion shown in this. Is it a short song? Or were you inspired by a song to write this? Just curious...
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The cowboys lament she done me wrong song. I enjoyed it short and sweet and to the heart of the matter. Thanks for your entry.
David Wrght -
Love the way you've fashioned this classic country theme into a triolet! A stylish and witty piece.
Bill
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all may be fair in love and war... but i would have went after my @#$%^&* horse!!!!!
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The contest is closed for judging which may take two or three days. My thanks to each of you for your great entry. Happy trails.
David Wrigh -
That catches the mood pretty well, one of those hurtin' poems.
Alone and blue I be/And angry too of course.
Nice write.
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Oh good one...has to be true.....well done.
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