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Change of Heart

Manipulate the stars
shining brightly
an altruistic desire 
to free

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Option 2
Manipulate, altruistic

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  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007
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    this is so peaceful, i really like how soft it is...like a breeze or something. nice use of the word bank too
    thanks for entering!