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Pain

I pulsate as the pain slices through my broken heart.

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option 2 pulsate slice

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  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007

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    ugh the idea of slicing a heart is not good for my squemish side!but to cause that reaction must mean you used it well!
    thanks for entering


  • Ladybug
    May 10, 2007
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    wow, very intriguing

    bet you place well in this one!!!