Sleeping with the lights on,
god's simulacrum form fades away
Author notes
I go to sleep---the Pretenders.
A contest entry
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Comments
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what a hautinng image...
thanks for entering, you used the prompt well!
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This is... wow... that is all I can say Nate... so short but so deep none-the-less! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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Well Mr. Nate:
We meet again.
This is really good for being sooo short. Plus, on a personal note, I love the term sleeping with the lights on 'cause it makes me think of the movie "Darkness Falls", but that's just the nerd in me. haha. <3



