Opal moon aches,
clinging shimmer essence
of night’s cherished caress.
clinging shimmer essence
of night’s cherished caress.
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Option 2 - words used:
opal
aches
clinging
shimmer
essence
cherished
caress
ten words or less
In a list
A contest entry
- I CHALLENGE YOU...RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW!!! by spot the pink.
1650 points, ended May 10, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent short write Lori. Good use of the word bank, very hard to do with ten words or less. It came out great. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the HM
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BEAUTIFUL!
WOW! Beautiful use of words to describe this awesome picture.
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This was a beautiful poem which I felt was softly sensual. I liked the natural description here. The imagery here was great. Good use of the words here. Congrats on the HM
Pozo
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aw i was hoping someone would do something great with the word opal...you used it really nicely...this is beautiful!
thanks for entering -
Perfect Match
The poem did much justice to the picture. Both are awesome.
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Just lovely, the embrace of a nights caress, what a joyous thought. Love, C
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Oh Lori,
This is beautiful! Wow! Awesome writing! Wishing you all the very best of everything!
Love much,
Sandy -
Wow!
Wonderful piece You have penned with the words from the bank
Love the images that come to Mind~
stain the palette
Thank You for sharing this with us!!
Loved it!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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