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A Night with no Morning

Overtaken
By shadows,
All I can say is
"I'm sorry."

Author notes

Okay, option number four from the point of view of the shy boy/girl...girl in this case ^^

A contest entry

Wow, ten or less is hard xD

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  • shysky
    May 29, 2007

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    Hmm.. I sat here and thought about that for awhile. The shadows and the mournful thought of a night where morning never comes. Well written! I love things that make me sit and think about them for awhile!


  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007

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    you chose your words well!!i like the thought of shadows overtaking...very clever
    thanks for entering