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A Winter Dream

Whiteness drifts slowly
The world dons a crystal gown
I shiver and smile

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I live in south-east Texas. Therefore, I have never been graced with the experience of snow.

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  • Eugene Cash Hensley
    August 28, 2007

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    i feel snow falling

    this is really good! how hard it can be to capture feelings in so few words, but you have done it very well. The last line serves effectively to remind the reader of similar experiences and even bring back the feeling again. Nice work!


  • Swan song gold member
    May 11, 2007
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    vERY WELL DONE U CAUGHT THE MOOD REALLY WELL