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You Kill

Each time you
            Manipulate
                      Steal
                            Lie
                              Relapse
                                      You kill me!

Author notes

over the past weekend my husband relapsed I personally am on the brink of divorce so it was hard to describe my feelings in less than ten words. i have a lot more.

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  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007

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    wow...im not sure what to say...its so emotive and so strong, especially with your whole situation...
    thanks for entering


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    May 10, 2007
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    well done!
    your words evoke a whole story untold