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Tightrope

Heart shimmer
essence shaded,
walking between
raging canyons,
passion's clouds.

Author notes

For Option 2 - wordbank - shimmer and essence
Option 6 - song title inspiration - Thin Line between Love and Hate

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  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007
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    ok this is odd, but it reminds me of in harry potter when they dissaparate...only obviously the words you used were far more emotive and almost tangiably real...(i hope the reference to HP didnt offend you i really do think this is fa
    thanks for entering!


  • Desire gold member
    May 9, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Powerful piece You have penned Sweetness
    The images stain the conscious and makes me want
    to hear more~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Loved this one You have created...
    Leaves much to think about- Inspires
    Passions clouds...

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


    • penman gold member
      May 9, 2007
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      Thank you precious. You always keep me on a tightrope of passions.