Cherished feather
Against skin, ‘love me?’
Asked. ‘Yes’ is replied.
Author notes
Found this quite tricky, using both the wordbank and the word limit It's option 2.
A contest entry
- I CHALLENGE YOU...RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW!!! by spot the pink.
1650 points, ended May 10, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Round and round the garden time, I feel, baby thoughts and adult memories, Nice job here.
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I like This
Really cute. You do well with challenges, I can tell.
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I liked this, it seemed to be kind of "cute" if that's the right word. Alot is said, for only having ten words, good job.
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ah a bit of slap and tickle lol feathers are pretty good or that yes, bringing delight to the senses
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this made me smile, it captured such an adorable moment... thanks for entering
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This is nice! I think you did really good!
Great job!
God bless you!
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I love this, pozo You used the words well (I read the contest criteria) Your poem makes sense and carries a delightful tone, playful and hopeful.
I wish you the best in the contest
love and
Mom
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