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Black Anger

The cuts burn you say, I smile and add salt.

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  • pozo
    May 10, 2007

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    This was quite a powerful and dark write I felt. This was a strong poem, it reminded me of the old saying 'salt in the wound' Congrats on the HM.
    Pozo


  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007
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    this is great!vindictive, and so simple...
    thanks for entering

  • poetesswiththemost
    May 9, 2007
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    ouch, that's harsh.