he is; perfect
to me
like sonnets to shakespear
love.
Author notes
option 3 =]
A contest entry
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Comments
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nice and sweet and to the point. good job
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interesting similie here...and its very effective, the ideal of perfection...
thanks for entering
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This is such a romantic piece. I liked your use of enjambment here. Good use of sibilance and the simile here. Good luck in the contest.
Pozo
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