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Middle of the road

crunch, pain, agony, death
answering a phone can be deadly?

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option 6 - 'Middle of the road'.

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  • pozo
    May 10, 2007

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    Dark first line with an interesting last line. I felt the last line was a very gripping write, it seemed somewhat of a cliffhanger which I liked. Congrats on the HM.
    Pozo


  • spot the pink
    May 10, 2007

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    ooh, now this is very poignant, i like it...maybe this would be effective in a road saety campaign or something?the onomatopeopaeic (im sorry my spelling is awful) words are really effective.
    thanks for entering


  • Cannonsfire
    May 10, 2007
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    Have you got car insurance Love, C


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 9, 2007

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    CUTE JUST CUTE

    I agree  100% the phone can be a living nightmare your worse enemy yet sometimes the leank to a love one...this is cute my friend and worth a gold.