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War

war

people fight all the time but yet we got to go and fight more and for what
shit that shouldnt even be

tears
they should be shed but not for fallen ones that shouldnt of died
shouldnt of even fought

goverment
telling people we have to protect out country
and yet there the ones that put us in the shit were in

death
this is what it all ends up as
only lifes ending so the goverment can be happy

blood
this is what is now on the country
wanting it to be or not it will always be like this

stupidity
thats what the US has come to
sending our people to war for the goverments mistakes

what has this world come to?
what has this nation fallen under?
why cant we just for once forget what they did and have our familys back?

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i lost two of my best friends to the damn war and one is MIS

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  • night-eyed demon
    July 12, 2007

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    WAR!!!!

    war will always be. Even between ourselves, in our own home town, community, and city. We say : we don't believe in war yet we make it. And that won't work
    Nice write!!!


  • ryleealyse-emo prep
    July 10, 2007
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    i totaly love it agree with it and understand it good 4 u


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    June 15, 2007

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    Awesome

    I completely fucking agree with you! It is really dumb that people who don't really want to fight or kill anyone, are the ones being sent in, why doesn't the fucking government go kill them all if they want them dead so much?! I fucking love this write! Some grammar errors and what-not, but w.e lol you made a good point! Listen to the song "Afraid to Shoot Strangers" by Iron Maiden, you'll love it because it is talking about what you are writing about in this!


  • LunaChaotic08
    May 28, 2007
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    this is deep. i like this:
    "death
    this is what it all ends up as
    only lifes ending so the goverment can be happy"

    i lost a good friend of mine too so i know what its like to be angry at the government and i am sure a lot of other people are too!