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Music

Melodies
Running though my head
Floating around me
Hiding me
Covering me
Letting me get lost
In my own world

Harmonies
Floating though my head
Circling around me
Hiding me
Covering me
Letting me release
All my anger, fear, pain

Rhythms
Circling though my head
Spinning around me
Hiding me
Covering me
Letting me forget
All my past, present, ignoring my future

Music is my soul
Causing me to be free
Letting me go
Allowing me to be myself
Letting my soul out
Causing me to feel light
Music is my soul

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Yeah.. i love music

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  • Dirty and Broken
    May 9, 2007
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    ignoring/forgetting past, present, future is not good, it is bad thing

  • Tearfueledpen
    May 9, 2007
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    I can tell you do. It's well written and I enjoyed your parallel structure.