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Not you, Never You

You are so
Jealous
That I
Can get
Everything
You can’t
Go ahead
Call me a whore
Go ahead
Bitch,
This is war
And I wish
I could rip out your heart
And stomp on it
With my
Stiletto
Bitch,
I will wrap
My perfectly
Manicured hands
Around your neck
And not even regret it
Bitch,
You wish he loved you
But who does he come to
Late at night
When he needs
A real woman
Not you
You heard me
Not you
It’s never you
And it never was
It was just you
Till’ he had his fun
He did
He had his fun
And he had it
HARD
But hun
It was with me
Not you

Never you

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  • Atrophya
    May 10, 2007

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    I love this poem and i hate someone just as much as the girl in this poem. Lol. I love it!! =] awesome write. ^-^


  • over the rainbow--x
    May 10, 2007

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    'He had his fun
    And he had it
    HARD
    But hun
    It was with me
    Not you

    Never you'
    love those lines^^^^ love the ending =]
    great poem =] ♥


  • Myjoy gold member
    May 9, 2007

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    Good lord, is this bases on something real in your life? I like the anger and the passion that it speaks of. This is just so raw, well done.


    • KittieLyyn
      May 9, 2007
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      ya theres some truth to it..its kind of aimed towards all the people who are mean to me...when really i know they are jealous