[W]hy are you doing this to me?
[I]'ll never stop loving you though,
[T]he times you hurt me, the times I cried,
[H]ave nothing to do with how I feel about you
[E]ach time you make me cry,I become
[V]oid of all feeling
[E]very moment you stare into my eyes, I begin to
[R]ealize how bad you are to me
[Y]ou say you're in love,
[W]hat kind of crap is that?
[O]verloaded with pain
[R]evealed with every punch
[D]own I'll go,down I'll stay
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Hannah Duffin
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Ohhhh I love acrostics!!! Very good job with this one!!!
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YAY! thanks for liking it lol
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You're right you do write like me. Or I like you whichever. I really liked this cause I can relate to it. It's very emotional and raw with pain.
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ha ha, thanks for the comment, great to see that people are actually reading my stuff. Oh, and at the moment, i'm listining to Dresden Dolls, ha ha thanks for introdusing me to them through this. take care
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You learned of the Dresden Dolls because of me? That's funny because I learned of them from some other person on here! LOL
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