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Date Night

I'll put on my littlest of
little black dresses
with nude pantyhose
four inch stilletos

I'll wear big silver
"hooker" hoop earrings
the reddest fire-engine-red
lipstick and a little extra
bling on the fingers

just ten more minutes
until he picks me up
so we can go for
sausage and pepperoni
olives and onions

the midnight showing
Rocky Horror Picture Show

we're kidless tonight!

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  • Elvenfairy
    June 10, 2007

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    its great to get out and have a night of dinner and a movie with your friend or lover. Of corse, I say this after having just spent the whole day with my BF so... I liked this.

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    Lovely piece, nice rhythm and flow. Loved the glimpse into a few stolen moments. Thnaks for this fine entry. Hugs, Bunny


    • PoeticEmily silver member
      May 31, 2007
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      THANK YOU!

      Thanks so much! It was a spur-of-the-moment write, so thank you!

  • Jade Scorpion
    May 13, 2007

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    Yes, it is wonderful when two married people can get time off from their little darlings to go out with each other. It's especially good when you aren't married to each other, but to someone else.