Faithful love flowing down from the thorn covered crown, makes me whole
Faithful love calms each fear, reaches down, dries each tear.
I'll never be the same for I've seen faithful love face to face.
Faithful love is a friend, welcome face, sweet embrace, tender touch filled with grace.
Faithful love endless power, living flame spirit's fire, burninig bright in the night guiding my way.
A contest entry
- Anything by HerbalGoat.
456 points, ended May 24, 2007, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a great write. We survive on the essence of faith. Your emotions run strong in this piece. Great job!
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Very touching, poet. This is more of a personal piece, but all I really have to suggest is that you maybe place 'faithful love' by itself, and then mention the rest of lines one, two, four and five; then conclude your poem with line three. This is only a mere suggest, though.
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lovely
A really lovely and lyrical poem that has a wonderful flow, and is very positive and inspirational. Thanks for sharing your fine talents, and best of luck in the contest!
David Michaels
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Welcome to allpoetry
Lovely and so true. What a wonderful expression of God's love as that is how I see this. Good flow and structure.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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i love the way u keep your faith! U insipre me to be faithfull to my love.. we have been engaged for 2 months now! love tha poem keep it up gurl!
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grate
This is a nice pome and I like the fact that you are faithful keep it up.
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