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Weather Through The Storm

Surrounded by ice
We'll shine together
Through the darkness
We got each other

I am the ghost of who you used to
But, now replaced by the snow white queen
Only left to drown in your mercy
You used to be so happy and carefree

Surrounded by ice
We'll shine together
Through the darkness
We got each other

I couldn't be there
I couldn't save you
I couldn't prevent who you’ve turned into

All I need is you
And I know you need me too

I'll keep you safe from the storm
All you have to do is call
I'll pick you up every time you fall
You can walk under my umbrella

Surrounded by ice
We'll shine together
Through the darkness
We got each other

I'm the ghost of who you used to be
Now, replaced by the snow white queen
Left only to drown in your mercy

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  • PerVirtuous
    May 10, 2007

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    I like this. It is very melodic and sings like a song. The image is loving and strong, even as it is sad and dark. Lots going for this. Great job, three bunnies!!